How to Write a Formal Email (Mittelstufe)

How to Write a Formal Email (Mittelstufe)

Zielsetzung:

Die Schüler:innen üben das Lesen und Schreiben offizieller E-Mails. Sie lernen über Struktur, Inhalt und Wortschatz, die in einer E-Mail verwendet werden.

Inhalt und Methodik:

Die Schüler:innen ordnen zunächst typische Vokabeln, die in E-Mails verwendet werden, den verschiedenen Elementen einer E-Mail zu. Dann lesen sie eine E-Mail und beantworten Fragen dazu. Schließlich schreiben sie selbst eine E-Mail.

Kompetenzen:

  • Wortschatztraining (gezielt für das Schreiben von E-Mails auf Englisch)
  • Leseverstehen
  • Texte strukturieren
  • Schreiben einer E-Mail

Niveau:

8. bis 10. Klasse


Anmerkung: Am Ende des Arbeitsblatts befinden sich zusätzliche Hilfestellungen für das Formulieren der eigenen E-Mail. Dies dient zur Unterstützung von schwächeren Schüler:innen.

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Target group and level

8. bis 10. Klasse

Subjects

English

How to Write a Formal Email (Mittelstufe)

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Vocabulary used in emails

In this worksheet, you will learn how to write official emails. First, test your knowledge on which phrases are used where in emails. Sort the phrases into the categories "Subject", "Greeting", "Introduction", and "Closing".

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How to write an email

Why write an email?

You might write an email to: send info | ask questions | make requests | share updates | confirm details | say thank you


Parts of an email

Subject

A short summary of the email's topic. It should be clear to catch the reader's attention. Example: "Meeting Confirmation for Thursday"

Greeting

The opening where you address the recipient. It should match the level of formality needed. Examples: "Dear …", "Hello …", "Hi …"

Introduction

The first paragraph where you might introduce yourself and explain why you're writing. Example: "I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to confirm the details of our upcoming meeting."

Body

The main part with your message. It should be clear and organized, using paragraphs for different points. Example: "Our meeting is set for Thursday at 2 PM in the conference room. Attached is the agenda. Contact me if you have questions."

Closing / Sign-off

  • The last paragraph where you wrap up your message and can express thanks. Example: "Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to seeing you on Thursday."
  • A polite way to end the email. Examples: "Sincerely," "Best regards," "Kind regards"

Signature

Your name and details like your job title and contact info. Example: John Doe | Marketing Manager | ABC Company | john.doe@example.com

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Greetings and sign-offs in emails

Writing greetings and farewells in formal emails

When you write a formal email in English, it is important to use the right greetings and sign-offs. Here are some tips:

Greetings:

  1. Dear [Name]: Use this when you know the person’s name. For example, "Dear Mr. Smith" or "Dear Ms. Johnson." TIP: It is always best to figure out the person's name who you are writing to.
  2. Dear Hiring Team / Dear Recruitment Team / Dear Hiring Committee / Dear Submissions Team: If you do not know the person's name you're writing to, this is a good way to still address the correct department.
  3. Dear Sir/Madam: You can use this when you do not know the name of the person you are writing to. It is polite and formal. However, it is a bit outdated and not that widely used anymore.


Sign-off:

  1. Yours faithfully: Use this when you started the email with "Dear Sir/Madam." It shows respect when you do not know the person’s name.
  2. Yours sincerely: Use this when you started the email with "Dear [Name]." It is polite and formal when you know the person’s name.

Remember, using the correct greeting and farewell makes your email look professional and shows respect to the person you are writing to.

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Reading an email

Read the following email, then answer the questions.

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Anna Schmidt

Inquiry About Language School Programs

To: info@us-languageschool.com

Dear Admissions Team, My name is Anna, and I am a student from Germany. I am 14 years old and learning English in school. I am writing to ask about language programs at your school in the USA. I am very interested in improving my English during the summer holidays. I want to learn more about American culture and make new friends. I have heard that your school offers programs for young people, and I would like to know more. Can you please tell me what kind of courses are available for students like me? I would also like to know what I need to do to apply for the program. Is there a form I need to fill out or an interview I must attend? Thank you very much for your help. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Anna Schmidt
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Your own email

Now it's your turn! Have another look at the info boxes earlier in the worksheet, then read the task below and write your own email.

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Task

Summer Language Course in New York

The Manhattan Language Institute in New York offers a summer language course for international students aged 13 to 18 who want to improve their English skills. The course lasts four weeks and includes daily classes, interactive workshops, and cultural excursions around the city. Students stay in dormitories close to the school, and the program promises a safe and friendly environment. They mention on their website that they provide a certificate upon completion. Write an email expressing your interest in joining the course and ask questions about the course schedule, accommodation, and any additional fees.

Your email

Sample solution

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Max Müller

Inquiry About Summer Language Course

To: info@manhattanlanguageinstitute.com

Dear Admissions Team, My name is Max Müller, and I am a 15-year-old student from Germany. I am learning English in school and want to improve my skills during the summer holidays. I read about your summer language course in New York and am very interested. Can you please tell me more about the course schedule? I would like to know what a typical day looks like. Also, could you give me information about the accommodation? Will I stay in a dormitory, and is it close to the school? Are there any additional fees for the program, such as for excursions or materials? I want to make sure I understand all the costs involved. Thank you very much for your help. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Max Müller

Help

Here is some additional information for students who need some extra help completing the task.

Tipps

  • Überlege dir einen klaren und prägnanten Betreff, wie zum Beispiel "Interest in Summer Language Course."
  • Beginne die E-Mail mit einer höflichen Anrede, wie "Dear Hiring Team" wenn du den Namen des Empfängers nicht kennst.
  • Stelle dich im ersten Satz vor und erkläre kurz, warum du schreibst: "My name is …, I am interested in…"
  • Formuliere deine Fragen klar und strukturiert, zum Beispiel zur Kursplanung, Unterkunft und zusätzlichen Gebühren.
  • Verwende einfache und klare Sprache, um Missverständnisse zu vermeiden.

So kannst du anfangen:

Subject: Interest in Summer Language Course

Dear Hiring Team,

My name is … and I am interested in joining the summer language course offered by the Manhattan Language Institute. I would like to know more about the course schedule, accommodations, and any additional fees…